I DID \o/ AND IT WASN'T EVEN A GAZILLION WORDS, WOOOOOO
*clears throat* Thank you so much! As always when I do a lot of POV-swapping, I'm so relieved it wasn't confusing or annoying - and that it really felt to you like there was a meaningful difference between their POVs that fit their characterization is, like, eight times better. :D GOAL ACHIEVED.
WHEN HAS JUMPING IN WITH BOTH FEET BECAUSE IT'S ~HIS RESPONSIBILITY~ EVER STEERED BRUCE WRONG. I MEAN, REALLY. /o\ Oh, Bruce.
:D Aww, yay, I'm so glad - I'm so glad about ALL this, obviously, that Bruce's perspective here is sufficiently Bruce-y, him testing his hypotheses for how best to handle this and discarding the failures as he goes. And one of the things I REALLY REALLY WANTED was to force Bruce to crack first, because I can hardly ever figure out how to make that happen. /o\ BUT THIS TIME HE HAD A RATIONALE. So that the rationale and the confession itself both worked for you is FANTASTIC. *fistpump*
:DDDDDDDDDD Haha, I figured I could get away with something a bit twee after all that angst! Perhaps the ship will settle for something demure and reasonable, like "Mrs. Commander". ;D Thank you so very very much, oh very anonymous anon, for all your lovely comments the whole way through - you're so so generous to me every time, favorite OP, and I'll never come up with enough ways to thank you for it. ♥ ♥ ♥ :D
Re: FILL: wildest dreams (burn it down); Bruce/Clark, heat (4/4)
*clears throat* Thank you so much! As always when I do a lot of POV-swapping, I'm so relieved it wasn't confusing or annoying - and that it really felt to you like there was a meaningful difference between their POVs that fit their characterization is, like, eight times better. :D GOAL ACHIEVED.
WHEN HAS JUMPING IN WITH BOTH FEET BECAUSE IT'S ~HIS RESPONSIBILITY~ EVER STEERED BRUCE WRONG. I MEAN, REALLY. /o\ Oh, Bruce.
:D Aww, yay, I'm so glad - I'm so glad about ALL this, obviously, that Bruce's perspective here is sufficiently Bruce-y, him testing his hypotheses for how best to handle this and discarding the failures as he goes. And one of the things I REALLY REALLY WANTED was to force Bruce to crack first, because I can hardly ever figure out how to make that happen. /o\ BUT THIS TIME HE HAD A RATIONALE. So that the rationale and the confession itself both worked for you is FANTASTIC. *fistpump*
:DDDDDDDDDD Haha, I figured I could get away with something a bit twee after all that angst! Perhaps the ship will settle for something demure and reasonable, like "Mrs. Commander". ;D Thank you so very very much, oh very anonymous anon, for all your lovely comments the whole way through - you're so so generous to me every time, favorite OP, and I'll never come up with enough ways to thank you for it. ♥ ♥ ♥ :D