You deserve an incredibly eloquent comment, but I find myself mostly wanting to enthusiastically second everything the other anon said above me. Plus or minus a THIS IS SO GOOD YAY WOW I LOVE IT. /o\
The prompt and premise are amazing, but you're doing the heavy lifting of delivering on them SO WELL. The false conversation and all the layers and levels to everything, every word and every action - all Bruce's weird hangups and all the second-guessing and analyzing Clark has to do in response, man, it's everything that's fantastic about identity porn with these two in a single amazing package.
And the other anon said this already, too, but I don't care and am going to tell you again - this:
maybe he just doesn't know how to do this unless he's being somebody else
is SOUL-DESTROYING and I'm SLAIN by it. GAH. THANK YOU FOR THAT DEATHLY PUNCH TO THE FEELINGS. This was excruciatingly hot and excruciatingly painful at the same time, and I just. orz THANK YOU.
Re: Fill: A Few Pages from this Closed Book: Bruce/Clark, Identity kink [1/3]
The prompt and premise are amazing, but you're doing the heavy lifting of delivering on them SO WELL. The false conversation and all the layers and levels to everything, every word and every action - all Bruce's weird hangups and all the second-guessing and analyzing Clark has to do in response, man, it's everything that's fantastic about identity porn with these two in a single amazing package.
And the other anon said this already, too, but I don't care and am going to tell you again - this:
maybe he just doesn't know how to do this unless he's being somebody else
is SOUL-DESTROYING and I'm SLAIN by it. GAH. THANK YOU FOR THAT DEATHLY PUNCH TO THE FEELINGS. This was excruciatingly hot and excruciatingly painful at the same time, and I just. orz THANK YOU.