:D Oh, thank you, anon - Bruce's issues are such incredible catnip to me, and I'm so pleased to think I'm capturing them adequately! Also so surprised I got through so much of this with no Alfred, because Alfred is so great (though I guess I shouldn't be too hard on myself when this has all been Clark POV).
... It's possible I could be projecting a little when it comes to Clark's mindless subliminal attraction to Batfleck Bruce Wayne looking relaxed and smug.
LOL, yes, Clark, I'm sure Bruce *attends* to his body's needs when you're not physically around ;DDD
I DON'T KNOW WHAT YOU MEAN BY THAT, ANON WHICH IS TO SAY HELL YEAH HE DOES
And I'm just so thrilled you liked that whole conversation + all the descriptions - as you might be able to tell, I tend to be wordy and go on a bit, and I'm never sure whether I'm on the right side of the line between "effective" and "confusing". /o\ Especially Clark's speech! (In outlining, the focus was mostly on bruised shirtlessness, but then the conversation just sort of wrote itself. Was it good? Was it bad?? I EDITED IT SO MUCH I COULDN'T TELL ANYMORE.) ♥
Re: FILL: coming up these steps to you; Bruce/Clark, saying "I love you" without ever saying it (5/6
... It's possible I could be projecting a little when it comes to Clark's mindless subliminal attraction to
BatfleckBruce Wayne looking relaxed and smug.LOL, yes, Clark, I'm sure Bruce *attends* to his body
's needswhen you're not physically around ;DDDI DON'T KNOW WHAT YOU MEAN BY THAT, ANON WHICH IS TO SAY HELL YEAH HE DOES
And I'm just so thrilled you liked that whole conversation + all the descriptions - as you might be able to tell, I tend to be wordy and go on a bit, and I'm never sure whether I'm on the right side of the line between "effective" and "confusing". /o\ Especially Clark's speech! (In outlining, the focus was mostly on bruised shirtlessness, but then the conversation just sort of wrote itself. Was it good? Was it bad?? I EDITED IT SO MUCH I COULDN'T TELL ANYMORE.) ♥