:D /o\ Aww, you're much too kind, anon! You're about to get this in stereo when I actually reply to your comments, but: I'm so glad the feedback was helpful to you! ♥
*clears throat* AND NOW. I was too slow to comment on the first batch of parts, you'd already gotten everything on the AO3 before I even finished reading and rereading and trying to decide what to say. And, lbr, hopefully you are already totally aware of how much I enjoyed this! But in case you lost track of that in the midst of me yelling about commas, I SO DID. I just love the systematic edge to Bruce's thought processes, the things he is and isn't noticing and when he's noticing them. And the identity porn here is a) hilarious, OH BRUCE, OH ALFRED, OH CLARK, and b) IDENTITY PORN, OH LOOK FAVORITE THING :D
In conclusion, this is great and I'm so excited to be even the tiniest bit of help to you while you work on it. ♥
Re: FILL: Regroup (4/many) -- Bruce/Clark, rough hatesex
*clears throat* AND NOW. I was too slow to comment on the first batch of parts, you'd already gotten everything on the AO3 before I even finished reading and rereading and trying to decide what to say. And, lbr, hopefully you are already totally aware of how much I enjoyed this! But in case you lost track of that in the midst of me yelling about commas, I SO DID. I just love the systematic edge to Bruce's thought processes, the things he is and isn't noticing and when he's noticing them. And the identity porn here is a) hilarious, OH BRUCE, OH ALFRED, OH CLARK, and b) IDENTITY PORN, OH LOOK FAVORITE THING :D
In conclusion, this is great and I'm so excited to be even the tiniest bit of help to you while you work on it. ♥