My darling! It’s so lovely to be reading you again!
I feel it necessary to point out that fills that take on an extensive length beyond your outline is not a terrible thing! As a greedy reader that can confidently speak for other greedy readers, long fills are lovely. What a greedy reader, such as myself, dislikes about long fills is the waiting for the next part. Patience may be a virtue, but it is damn inconvenient when the beautiful words of writers like you are a fix for addicts like myself and we have to wait—because what you write seems so effortlessly eloquent and we have very little idea of the trials and tribulations that you, as a writer, have suffered to deliver those words to us. And if I recall correctly there was a unanimous outcry for thousands and thousands of more words for a fill. ;-)
Now, this. This is beautiful.
It’s heartbreaking how Bruce has to manage his grief and mourning to fit with his image, but it is so very Batman.
And Bruce analyzing Clark’s motives for begging him to save his mother. How a part of him hopes that Clark trusted him, but the other part of him things that Clark was being pragmatic in knowing that he didn’t qualify in Bruce’s paradigm of ‘those who need protection.’ Batman, you’d think, would be proud that Clark could plan like that. Bruce. Bruce will suffer because he does it so beautifully, doesn’t he?
Clark! Coming back. Seeking comfort from his mother. Martha! Her uncertainty of Clark and how Bruce is the first she calls. Despite all the horror stories that it could end in, how Martha just wants to comfort her son!
I can’t wait to see how Clark will react to whoever shows up in forty-five minutes, be it Batman or Bruce, and how that will go down.
You’re doing it again! You sadist! I’m dying here because you insist on killing me! Guh! I can’t wait to find out more!
Re: FILL: as to which may be the true; Bruce/Clark, identity porn (1/?)
I feel it necessary to point out that fills that take on an extensive length beyond your outline is not a terrible thing! As a greedy reader that can confidently speak for other greedy readers, long fills are lovely. What a greedy reader, such as myself, dislikes about long fills is the waiting for the next part. Patience may be a virtue, but it is damn inconvenient when the beautiful words of writers like you are a fix for addicts like myself and we have to wait—because what you write seems so effortlessly eloquent and we have very little idea of the trials and tribulations that you, as a writer, have suffered to deliver those words to us. And if I recall correctly there was a unanimous outcry for thousands and thousands of more words for a fill. ;-)
Now, this. This is beautiful.
It’s heartbreaking how Bruce has to manage his grief and mourning to fit with his image, but it is so very Batman.
And Bruce analyzing Clark’s motives for begging him to save his mother. How a part of him hopes that Clark trusted him, but the other part of him things that Clark was being pragmatic in knowing that he didn’t qualify in Bruce’s paradigm of ‘those who need protection.’ Batman, you’d think, would be proud that Clark could plan like that. Bruce. Bruce will suffer because he does it so beautifully, doesn’t he?
Clark! Coming back. Seeking comfort from his mother. Martha! Her uncertainty of Clark and how Bruce is the first she calls. Despite all the horror stories that it could end in, how Martha just wants to comfort her son!
I can’t wait to see how Clark will react to whoever shows up in forty-five minutes, be it Batman or Bruce, and how that will go down.
You’re doing it again! You sadist! I’m dying here because you insist on killing me! Guh! I can’t wait to find out more!