There are never too many em dashes, anon! :D More seriously, this is such a perfect portrait of BvS's paranoid and obsessive Bruce and I absolutely love it. You've captured the essence of kinky fever lust that shades basically everything about BvS and Bruce's Thing About Superman so so exactly, and the double meaning of how desperately Bruce wants to find Superman's weakness, gah. GAH. Thank you so much for this, it is MAGNIFICENT.